Post by Black Flora on Oct 24, 2009 11:15:29 GMT -5
This is not the thread for all of you to come for help!!! Just to get that out into the air.
SO if I needed/wanted help with my rping (which I do and I am getting help with my friend) then I would MAKE MY OWN THREAD!!!!! and wait for an admin or a good rper to reply some help like so:
Thread by ------------(in this case Black Flora):
So I need help in -------such and such an area for example one liners----
Best writing you can do: Thistlefur jumped through the entrance to the cave and landed on her feet, growling she took off again after the small kit who had made a run for it, he was a trouble maker.
Thread Reply By------- (I'll help myself so...) Black Flora.
Suggestions: Well you could put more description in the post to make it more interesting, there's hardly an answer post possible to be made to an uninteresting one liner. I'll do your post the way I think it should be done.
Suggestion incorporated in post: Thistlefur lept gracefully through the air, concentration written all over her face, she crouched to absorb the shock of landing on her small paws. Growling in annoyance she sprang forward again, her green eyes searching the undergrowth for the troublesome runaway kit. Her muscles rippled under her fur as she caught sight of the kit again and she sprang up into the air soaring over the kit and landing in front of it, forcing it to either stop or swing around and retreat.
Comment and additional help: See? All you need to do is make it more interesting and you've got yourself an at least hundred word paragraph. And that's only a short one.
So get it? Here's the form and make YOUR OWN THREAD! for this please:
Thread by:
Area's in need of help:
A post (don't spend all day trying to perfect it, that's what this is here for.):
This is for the REPLY!!! reply to the thread made by the person please!
Suggestions to the area's in need of help:
Suggestion incorporated in post:
Additional comments and help:
There we go have fun!!!!
SO if I needed/wanted help with my rping (which I do and I am getting help with my friend) then I would MAKE MY OWN THREAD!!!!! and wait for an admin or a good rper to reply some help like so:
Thread by ------------(in this case Black Flora):
So I need help in -------such and such an area for example one liners----
Best writing you can do: Thistlefur jumped through the entrance to the cave and landed on her feet, growling she took off again after the small kit who had made a run for it, he was a trouble maker.
Thread Reply By------- (I'll help myself so...) Black Flora.
Suggestions: Well you could put more description in the post to make it more interesting, there's hardly an answer post possible to be made to an uninteresting one liner. I'll do your post the way I think it should be done.
Suggestion incorporated in post: Thistlefur lept gracefully through the air, concentration written all over her face, she crouched to absorb the shock of landing on her small paws. Growling in annoyance she sprang forward again, her green eyes searching the undergrowth for the troublesome runaway kit. Her muscles rippled under her fur as she caught sight of the kit again and she sprang up into the air soaring over the kit and landing in front of it, forcing it to either stop or swing around and retreat.
Comment and additional help: See? All you need to do is make it more interesting and you've got yourself an at least hundred word paragraph. And that's only a short one.
So get it? Here's the form and make YOUR OWN THREAD! for this please:
Thread by:
Area's in need of help:
A post (don't spend all day trying to perfect it, that's what this is here for.):
This is for the REPLY!!! reply to the thread made by the person please!
Suggestions to the area's in need of help:
Suggestion incorporated in post:
Additional comments and help:
There we go have fun!!!!
